Friday, 18 December 2015

Okay Or Not- I Decide



You told me that,
My love for you was tad,
And made me sad,
But, it’s still Okay…….


You labelled my views immature,
And yours as pure,
But, it’s still Okay…….


You parted your way,
Without having a say,
But, it’s still Okay…….


Now you wanna come back,
To hug me again,
And forget your pain,
No, it’s NOT okay!


I am a man of my own,
Have over the years grown,
Let it be known,
That it’s NOT okay,

IT’S JUST NOT  OKAY!

12 comments:

  1. You are being adamant..maybe the person has realized and wanting to come back!:)
    Nice simple poem..

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    1. You hit the nail on head, Sunita. Adamancy is the central theme of this poem, and you got it right :)

      Perhaps the writer is enjoying a few moments of adamancy before the good sense kicks in.

      It feels so good to the writer when some reader get exactly what the writer had in mind while penning his/her thoughts.

      Thank you Sunita :)

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  2. cute! short & sweet welcoming poem expressed in a wonderful way!
    keep writing :)

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    1. Thanks Sowmya, for you words of appreciation....

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  3. Very nice "O.K. or Not, I decide".
    It is a wonderful expression.

    Anil Sahu

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    1. Thank you, Anil. Glad it appealed to you.

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  4. Unable to forgive, failure to move on, stuck in the past....it's not okay....Wonderful poem

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    1. Thank you Sunaina, for reading, and letting me know your views :)

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  5. A different perspective...not the usual sweet romance oozing from the poem..liked it... :-)

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    1. Thanks, Maniparna. Happy to note that you could note the different note this poem makes.....

      Your comment made me happy :)

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  6. Lovely poem! And like the different take. Maybe he will give in later after all :)

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    1. Thanks, Leena. You seem to have extrapolated the next move rightly :)

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